Phân tích "International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its advantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 11/1/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its advantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its advantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (advantages>disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: uplift several other sectors of the economy along with itself
      • Supporting idea: Hospitality, transportation, leisure are some of the industries that are greatly benefitted by the development of tourism. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng topic Transportation IELTS 
      • Example: The tourism boom in Thailand has led to a significant increase in hotels, resorts, and other types of accommodation, creating a demand for construction workers, housekeepers, chefs, and other hospitality professionals. This has boosted employment and income generation in the hospitality sector.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: Local people can have more job opportunities in hotels or restaurants and therefore earn more money to improve their living standards. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng THEREFORE & HENCE trong tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: The influx of job opportunities in the hospitality sector contributes to the local economy's growth, fostering financial stability and development. 
      • Example: In a small town in Italy, the establishment of a new upscale hotel brought about a significant increase in job opportunities for local residents. The hotel, catering to tourists seeking an authentic Italian experience, employed local individuals in various roles, such as receptionists, chefs, housekeepers, and tour guides.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: uplift several other sectors of the economy along with itself
        • Supporting idea: Hospitality, transportation, leisure are some of the industries that are greatly benefitted by the development of tourism. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng topic Transportation IELTS 
        • Example: Example: The tourism boom in Thailand has led to a significant increase in hotels, resorts, and other types of accommodation, creating a demand for construction workers, housekeepers, chefs, and other hospitality professionals. This has boosted employment and income generation in the hospitality sector.
      • Main idea 2: Local people can have more job opportunities in hotels or restaurants and therefore earn more money to improve their living standards. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng THEREFORE & HENCE trong tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: The influx of job opportunities in the hospitality sector contributes to the local economy's growth, fostering financial stability and development. 
        • Example: In a small town in Italy, the establishment of a new upscale hotel brought about a significant increase in job opportunities for local residents. The hotel, catering to tourists seeking an authentic Italian experience, employed local individuals in various roles, such as receptionists, chefs, housekeepers, and tour guides.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: tourists and foreign nationals might be unaware of the social norms and conventions of their visiting country. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Phân biệt May – might (có lẽ)
        • Supporting idea: There have also been several cases of tourists intentionally desecrating religious and heritage sites that are popular tourist attractions.
        • Example: In 2013, a group of tourists visited the ancient city of Bagan in Myanmar, a UNESCO World Heritage Site known for its thousands of pagodas and temples. Despite the cultural significance of the site, some tourists were reported intentionally climbing and defacing the structures, showcasing a lack of awareness or respect for the local cultural and religious norms.
      • Main idea 2: As for the countries that play host to international tourists, the rise in costs of living may lay much pressure on local people and be a detriment to domestic travel. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "pressure" như động từ và danh từ tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: This is because the growth in the number of tourists from abroad would encourage costs of hotel rooms and other services to increase
        • Example: The surge in international tourists in popular destinations like Barcelona has led to increased demand for accommodations, causing a notable spike in living costs, particularly the prices of hotel rooms and other services, thereby exerting pressure on local residents and hindering their ability to afford domestic travel.
           

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